Fiona, you have done a fantastic job of putting this Keynote presentation together. You listened to our feedback about including more detailed information and have done some really good research. You found great pictures to go with your paragraphs too. We are really impressed by your computer skills. A goal for next time would be to proof-read your finished Keynote carefully. I had to type in a few words you'd missed out as well as some full stops. I will also show you how to use the spell checker. Overall, a really good information report, well done
Hi Fiona, it's Lukas here I learnt that giraffes have 32 teeth and I liked your pictures. You have done a great job.Next time could you tell us the weight of the giraffe other than that you've done a great job.
Fiona, you have done a fantastic job of putting this Keynote presentation together. You listened to our feedback about including more detailed information and have done some really good research. You found great pictures to go with your paragraphs too. We are really impressed by your computer skills. A goal for next time would be to proof-read your finished Keynote carefully. I had to type in a few words you'd missed out as well as some full stops. I will also show you how to use the spell checker. Overall, a really good information report, well done
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ReplyDeleteHi Fiona, it's Lukas here I learnt that giraffes have 32 teeth and I liked your pictures. You have done a great job.Next time could you tell us the weight of the giraffe other than that you've done a great job.
ReplyDeleteHi lukas I did tell the weight of the giraffe look in appearance
ReplyDeleteHi Fiona it 's Amiri here I didn't know that giraffes had horns called ossicones. the report was amazing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Amiri From Fiona
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