Billie, you have done a really good job with putting this Keynote presentation together, well done. You picked up how to use the technology really quickly and we think the way you taught other students how to use it and helped them was fantastic so thank you. Some goals for you with your writing for next time could be 1) to include more detailed information - for example you could have included the size and weight of great whites, what the great white's predators are (e.g. orcas), how many babies are born at a time and what they are called etc and how long a great white lives for. 2) Proof-reading your writing out loud - making sure you have not left any words out and that your writing makes 100% sense - I had to fix a couple of things before I could post your presentation on our blog. But overall, you've done a very good job. By the way, did you see the Australian surfer Mick Fanning get attacked by the great on the news? He was pretty lucky!
Thanks Mrs Pulman for that feed back but there is some bits that I could improve in my report like how much they weigh, length, and sizes and much more bye Billie boo
Billie, you have done a really good job with putting this Keynote presentation together, well done. You picked up how to use the technology really quickly and we think the way you taught other students how to use it and helped them was fantastic so thank you. Some goals for you with your writing for next time could be 1) to include more detailed information - for example you could have included the size and weight of great whites, what the great white's predators are (e.g. orcas), how many babies are born at a time and what they are called etc and how long a great white lives for. 2) Proof-reading your writing out loud - making sure you have not left any words out and that your writing makes 100% sense - I had to fix a couple of things before I could post your presentation on our blog. But overall, you've done a very good job. By the way, did you see the Australian surfer Mick Fanning get attacked by the great on the news? He was pretty lucky!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs Pulman for that feed back but there is some bits that I could improve in my report like how much they weigh, length, and sizes and much more bye Billie boo
DeleteHi Billie. I think you did a great job. I'd like to know how sharks can smell one drop of blood from one kilometre away.
ReplyDeleteHi Danica its me Billie its because the have special snouts that make them smell from far away because they want food as well
ReplyDeleteHi Billie.I think you've done a great job and added lots of detail.I'd like to know how big a great white shark can grow up too.
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