It was an exciting day. It was my sister’s birthday. My mum, my dad and I made a birthday card for her while she was sleeping. My friend came over and knocked on the door I opened the door he bought a necklace as a gift for my sister. My sister’s friend came over with a gift for her and a card.The gift was a green and purple handbag.My friend and I woke her up,my dad made pizza. It smelled delicious and he also bought KFC. Every one said surprise high pitched and loudly like a girl. My sister opened her gift and the card, we ate the food it was so yummy. She had the best day ever in her life.
By Rishap
Hi Rishap that was really kind of you to buy your sister a necklase for her birthday
ReplyDeleteI beat she had the best day of her life.
what I think that you should do next time is try and writ a little bit more and use more adjectives
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